From 1ded1d534ca867daf0896e6419cb7de9a37bb446 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: jacquarg <guillaume.jacquart@hoodbrains.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Mar 2022 22:43:56 +0100
Subject: Update wordings #4743

---
 .../features/dashboard/DashboardFragment.kt        |  2 +-
 app/src/main/res/layout/fragment_trackers.xml      |  2 +-
 app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml                | 47 +++++++++++-----------
 3 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

(limited to 'app')

diff --git a/app/src/main/java/foundation/e/privacycentralapp/features/dashboard/DashboardFragment.kt b/app/src/main/java/foundation/e/privacycentralapp/features/dashboard/DashboardFragment.kt
index 89f0dd1..db9dcce 100644
--- a/app/src/main/java/foundation/e/privacycentralapp/features/dashboard/DashboardFragment.kt
+++ b/app/src/main/java/foundation/e/privacycentralapp/features/dashboard/DashboardFragment.kt
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ class DashboardFragment :
         if (state.activeTrackersCount != null && state.trackersCount != null) {
             binding.amITracked.subTitle = getString(R.string.dashboard_am_i_tracked_subtitle, state.trackersCount, state.activeTrackersCount)
         } else {
-            binding.amITracked.subTitle = getString(R.string.trackers_title)
+            binding.amITracked.subTitle = ""
         }
 
         binding.myLocation.subTitle = getString(
diff --git a/app/src/main/res/layout/fragment_trackers.xml b/app/src/main/res/layout/fragment_trackers.xml
index f04379e..599d68d 100644
--- a/app/src/main/res/layout/fragment_trackers.xml
+++ b/app/src/main/res/layout/fragment_trackers.xml
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
                     android:layout_width="match_parent"
                     android:paddingTop="16dp"
                     android:lineSpacingExtra="5sp"
-                    android:text="@string/manage_trackers_info"
+                    android:text="@string/trackers_info"
                     />
 
                 <include layout="@layout/trackers_item_graph"
diff --git a/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml b/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
index f63da8b..7186811 100644
--- a/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
+++ b/app/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
@@ -3,68 +3,68 @@
 
     <!-- Dashboard -->
     <string name="dashboard_title">Quick Privacy</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_state_subtitle_off">Your online privacy is not protected</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_state_subtitle_on">Your online privacy is now protected!</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_state_subtitle_off">You are not protected against tracking and surveillance</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_state_subtitle_on">You are protected against tracking and surveillance</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_title_on">Tap to disable your privacy preferences</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_title_off">Tap to enable your privacy preferences</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_trackers_label">Trackers:</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_trackers_off">Vulnerable</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_trackers_on">Denied</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_state_geolocation_label">Geolocation:</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_state_geolocation_label">Location:</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_geolocation_off">Exposed</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_geolocation_on">Fake</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_state_ipaddress_label">IP address:</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_state_ipaddress_label">Real IP address:</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_ipaddress_off">Exposed</string>
     <string name="dashboard_state_ipaddress_on">Hidden</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_graph_label">Personal data leakage</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_graph_label">Trackers\' activity</string>
     <string name="dashboard_graph_period">Today</string>
     <string name="dashboard_graph_trackers_legend">%s Trackers</string>
 
-    <string name="dashboard_am_i_tracked_title">Manage trackers</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_am_i_tracked_title">Manage apps\' trackers</string>
     <string name="dashboard_am_i_tracked_subtitle">%1$d app trackers, %2$d active trackers</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_apps_permissions_title">Apps Permissions</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_apps_permissions_title">Manage apps\' permissions</string>
     <string name="dashboard_apps_permissions_subtitle">Manage your permissions</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_location_title">Geolocation mode</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_location_title">Manage my location</string>
     <string name="dashboard_location_subtitle_off">Real geolocation</string>
     <string name="dashboard_location_subtitle_specific">Specific fake geolocation</string>
     <string name="dashboard_location_subtitle_random">Random fake geolocation</string>
-    <string name="dashboard_internet_activity_privacy_title">My internet activity privacy</string>
+    <string name="dashboard_internet_activity_privacy_title">Manage my Internet address</string>
     <string name="dashboard_internet_activity_privacy_subtitle_off">Real IP address exposed</string>
     <string name="dashboard_internet_activity_privacy_subtitle_on">Real IP address hidden</string>
 
     <!-- IpScrambling -->
-    <string name="ipscrambling_title">My internet activity</string>
-    <string name="ipscrambling_info">Choose if you want to expose your real IP address or hide when Quick Privacy is enabled.</string>
-    <string name="ipscrambling_real_ip_label">Use real IP address</string>
+    <string name="ipscrambling_title">Manage my internet address</string>
+    <string name="ipscrambling_info">Your Internet address or IP address is the identifier assigned to your phone when connected to the Internet.\n\nManage my Internet address enables you to use a fake IP address instead of your real IP address. This way, your internet activity cannot be linked to your real IP address and to your device.</string>
+    <string name="ipscrambling_real_ip_label">Use my real IP address</string>
     <string name="ipscrambling_real_ip_subtitle">I can be tracked by my IP address</string>
-    <string name="ipscrambling_hide_ip_label">Hide IP address</string>
+    <string name="ipscrambling_hide_ip_label">Hide my real IP address</string>
     <string name="ipscrambling_hide_ip_subtitle">I am anonymous on the internet</string>
-    <string name="ipscrambling_tor_disclaimer"><b>Note:</b> when active, this setting will slow down your Internet connectivity speed (uses the Tor network).</string>
+    <string name="ipscrambling_tor_disclaimer"><b>Note:</b> While this option is active, your Internet speed is likely to be significantly reduced.</string>
     <string name="ipscrambling_location_label">My internet activity must appear from:</string>
     <string name="ipscrambling_any_location">Random country</string>
-    <string name="ipscrambling_select_app">Apply this setting to all selected apps:</string>
+    <string name="ipscrambling_select_app">Apply this setting to all selected applications:</string>
     <string name="ipscrambling_error_quickprivacy_disabled">Enabled Quick Privacy to use functionalities</string>
     <string name="ipscrambling_warning_starting_long">Our scrambling IP service is taking time to launch. It can take a few minutes. Leaving the screen won\'t interrupt the process.</string>
 
 
     <!-- Location -->
-    <string name="location_title">Fake my location</string>
-    <string name="location_info">Choose if you want to use your real location when Quick Privacy is enabled.</string>
-    <string name="location_use_real_location">Use real location</string>
-    <string name="location_use_random_location">Use random plausible location</string>
-    <string name="location_use_specific_location">Use specific location</string>
+    <string name="location_title">Manage my location</string>
+    <string name="location_info">Your location can reveal a lot about yourself or your activities.\n\nManage my location enables you to use a fake location instead of your real position. This way, your real location isn\'t shared with applications that might be snooping too much.</string>
+    <string name="location_use_real_location">Use my real location</string>
+    <string name="location_use_random_location">Use a random plausible location</string>
+    <string name="location_use_specific_location">Use a specific location</string>
     <string name="location_hint_longitude">Longitude</string>
     <string name="location_hint_latitude">Latitude</string>
     <string name="location_input_error">Invalid coordinates</string>
 
     <!-- Trackers -->
-    <string name="trackers_title">Manage trackers</string>
-    <string name="trackers_info">See tracker usage and which trackers are present in your apps.</string>
+    <string name="trackers_title">Manage apps\' trackers</string>
+    <string name="trackers_info">Trackers are pieces of code hidden within applications. They collect your data and follow your activity 24/7: it feels like your phone listens to you.\n\nYou can see how many trackers are active behind the scenes, and you can block all trackers for the best protection. As it could cause some applications to malfunction, you can also fine tune your setting and choose specifically which trackers you want to block.</string>
     <string name="trackers_count_label">%d trackers</string>
     <string name="trackers_period_day">24 hours</string>
     <string name="trackers_period_month">past month</string>
     <string name="trackers_period_year">past year</string>
-    <string name="trackers_applist_title">Allow or deny trackers in apps</string>
+    <string name="trackers_applist_title">Manage trackers used in applications:</string>
     <string name="trackers_graph_hours_period_format">HH:mm</string>
     <string name="trackers_graph_days_period_format">MMM d - EEE</string>
     <string name="trackers_graph_months_period_format">MMM yyyy</string>
@@ -108,7 +108,6 @@
     <string name="click_to_learn_more">Click to learn more</string>
     <string name="apps_permissions">Apps Permission</string>
     <string name="trackers">Trackers</string>
-    <string name="manage_trackers_info">See trackers usage over time and manage trackers available in applications</string>
     <string name="following_trackers_in_use">Following trackers are in use</string>
     <string name="enable_disable_tracker_info">Enable or disable this tracker for the following apps</string>
     <string name="tracker">Tracker</string>
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